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Well ide like to start off saying that this work is purely genuine , and i really do love how it looks as i can actually relate to such art .

Ill start off with the originality of the artwork , as it might resemble several Female characters from different worlds ( Aeon Flux for hair , Star Wars [ the princess ] for lips .

hence i think if u were to add more smoothness and texture , create more depth to the hair , change colors perhaps , it would deff give a better impact on the overall artwork .

Technique , i cant possibly argue with the technique , since im not an expert in drawing characters , but i do tend to watch alot of Anime , considering that fact , ide say ure technique has its own style and taste for it . It identifies you among all other artists my only advice is , add more dynamic elements to ure art , perhaps some accessories , piercings , necklaces , tattoo's , a messy hair do , a bandana .

As For Everything Else i Think Youve Nailed it .

Im Only Rating this artwork as a 3.5 due to the reasons i mentioned up there . But in my eyes its a 4 . i like it , and its been faved